'euh...désolé si je te déçois mais tu n'est surement pas le premier à vouloir leur envoyer un scénario y a de fortes chances que tu sois pris mais...

Sérieux Martyx t a un compte Skyrock ... MOI AUSSI    

Avertissement : c'est en anglais le Script .
Des volontaires toujours ?!   

Et sinon t'a peut-etre raison Squint :p

Yep

Vous avez tous des compte Skyrock ??? comme moi   

ouais j'en ai un mais j'lai abbandonné ça fait plus de 2 ans!
bref...

non pas moi

what?

de comte skyrok

tu peux en créer si tu veut

mes parents ne veulent pas

pourquoi?

Le script vous sera délivrer pendant les vacances

YAHOO j'ai TROP hâte!!!!!!!!!!!!

.... Et la prochaine partie peut-etre aujourd'hui

ok

Voila ce que donne le demi-Script en Znglais , et comme je l'ai dis , il fait un mile !

"At the beginning , Sid will be the narrator to introduce us to the story with of course a little presentation on the herd’s situation . First , the herd will be unchanged , and we will focus primly on the saber couple . We will see many dialogues between them and many parts of them hunting . Then the trigger part will be the sudden absence of Peaches and Louis , and the arrival of an incomer ( as told in the synopsis) who will be none other than Diego’s secret half-brother named Lence . Diego will recognize him quickly , but not Lence (They didn’t see each other after 10 years , and his brother oversees him as dead ) The truth behind this character is that he is the son of Sotto , and he’s searching for revenge against Manny’s family . and he’s not alone : Lence is escorted by 2 other sabers (One will be Zeke , the ancient member of Sotto’s clan , and Jayle , a female saber which her origins are unknown ) including the chief clan named Okio who later will be known as Shira’s old Clan leader , from which she escaped . With the presence of this odd-figure , Shira will start to have visions and nightmares from her horrible past . Deeper in the movie, we will learn that the wounded saber is actually a spy at the service Okio , from which he’ll information to prepare an ambush on the herd . As Sid continues to search for Peaches , Crash and Eddie will meet the path of Buck , The lost weasel , clearly without his knife .
As he tells his story of being part of the pirate Crew (After having his world compressed by the terrible earth quake and being lost in the middle of the ocean , drifting) , he’ll explain that he had relationships with Shira , by talking to her day and Night about themselves . But one day , he asked a question about her past , and it got him into trouble : the saber will go away sobbing quietly , and Gupta will accuse Buck of being a trouble maker , and they will get into a great fight , which will end by the defeat of Buck , and his exclusion from the crew by a Knock-out .
He’ll will be transported (Without buck knowing) in a deep ship level where he will be left to melt with the ship till now. And at the moment that the herd took possession of the ship , he’ll drift ashore aon a beach , without his precious knife .
The story finished, he’ll be volunteer to help the possums to find Peaches . Returning to the herd’s situation , Okio’s group will attack without warning (including Lence) . Battle parts will be everywhere .
Back to Buck , the little group will find Peaches with the Brat pack , looking amazingly the big whale Precious having a problem with her mouth .By the sudden feeling of faith , Buck will adventure into the big body of the monster , to try and find the object he needed . After 15 minutes of silence , Precious will belch out Buck on the beach , where he’ll have a shiny peace in his left hand . As he washes it , he’ll be extremely happy to rediscover his deer old knife and will dance for hours !
The battle didn’t end well , with Zeke forever terrorized by looking up at “Diego’s ghost” , will run away far deep in the island , Jayle will join Okio at the bottom of a beach-cliff , pushed by Manny , and Lence will be badly wounded again by Shira , because of the unpredictable attck on her .
As Diego lies next to him and fill his brother with lies to convince him of their innocence ; he’ll also tell him that he was his Brother , and that he was thankful to meet him again . To the death of Lence , a long emotional part will stay for a minute . After that Shira will explain to Diego that she remembered all of her past : at the time that she was born , she receive a negative view from the pack , and was quickly asked to die (They’re pack thought that it was some sort of curse for having a white saber in their midst) , at that moment , she ran-away , leaving her family without saying goodbye . She really regretted it , but the trouble washed away as she joined Gutt’s crew .
Buck and the others will join the half-pack , and at the moment that Shira sees the weasel , they will show their relationship by a hug , from which Buck will tell her that she made the best choice , Shira smiles .
At the end , we will see a cameo of Roshan , now adult , with his clan in another world , where he rethinks of the necklace that he left to Manny .

The END !"

Voila , des avis avant que je le post à Blue skies ?

WAWOU ils vont ADORER!!!!!!

Merci beaucoup :)
Sinon est-ce-que tu pourrais la juger plus longueument ? :)

Franchement , je la trouve bien construite , il y a une histoire (qui tient la route !) , rien d'autre à dire , excepté qu'il serait intéressant de l'envoyer à Blue Sky , ça pourrait les intéresser !

Merci merci ... MERCI pour l'avis . Ca compte beaucoup pour moi ! :D
J'espère que ce Script sera officialisé ! :Tears:
Une petite question : Vous penser que je devrais mettre Oscar ou Zeke ?
Et oups j'ai vue qu'il y avais des incompréhensions dans les phrases :p

Impec'! Bon projet, de l'envoyer! J'espère qu'il sera bien reçu!

At the beginning , Sid will be the narrator to introduce us to the story with of course a little presentation on the herd’s situation . First , the herd will be unchanged , and we will focus primly on the saber couple . We will see many dialogues between them and many parts of them hunting . Then the trigger part will be the sudden absence of Peaches and Louis , and the arrival of an incomer ( as told in the synopsis) who will be none other than Diego’s secret half-brother named Lence . Diego will recognize him quickly , but not Lence (They didn’t see each other after 10 years , and his brother oversees him as dead ) The truth behind this character is that he is the son of Sotto , and he’s searching for revenge against Manny’s family . and he’s not alone : Lence is escorted by 2 other sabers (One will be Zeke , the ancient member of Sotto’s clan , and Jayle , a female saber which her origins are unknown ) including the chief clan named Okio who later will be known as a Member of Shira’s previous clan , from which she escaped . With the presence of this odd-figure , Shira will start to have visions and nightmares from her horrible past . Deeper in the movie, we will learn that the wounded saber is actually a spy at the service Okio , from which he’ll information to prepare an ambush on the herd . As Sid continues to search for Peaches , Crash and Eddie will meet the path of Buck , The lost weasel , clearly without his knife .
As he tells his story of being part of the pirate Crew (After having his world compressed by the terrible earth quake and being lost in the middle of the ocean , drifting) , he’ll explain that he had relationships with Shira , by talking to her day and Night about themselves . But one day , he asked a question about her past , and it got him into trouble : the saber will go away sobbing quietly , and Gupta will accuse Buck of being a trouble maker , and they will get into a great fight , which will end by the defeat of Buck , and his exclusion from the crew by a Knock-out .
He’ll will be transported (Without buck knowing) in a deep ship level where he will be left to melt with the ship till now. And at the moment that the herd took possession of the ship , he’ll drift ashore on a beach , without his precious knife .
The story finished, he’ll be volunteer to help the possums to find Peaches . Returning to the herd’s situation , Okio’s group will attack without warning (including Lence) . Battle parts will be everywhere .
Back to Buck , the little group will find Peaches with the Brat pack , stucked looking amazingly at the big whale Precious having a problem with her mouth .By the sudden feeling of destiny , Buck will adventure into the big body of the monster , to try and find the object he needed . Storm will rise up and Buck will have problem inside . After 15 minutes of silence , Precious will belch out Buck on the beach , where he’ll have a shiny peace in his left hand . As he washes it , he’ll be extremely happy to rediscover his deer old knife and will dance for hours ! But as he calms down , he rethinks of Rudy , and also the fact that he’ll never see him again , he’ll curse himself for his mistake of leaving his dear old friend without saying goodbye .
The storm still kicked up and the battle didn’t end well : Jayle will be knocked out severely ; Okio will be sent down a cliff and will suffer a quick end .
Lence will be badly hurt by Zeke for a thing zeke could never forgive : by the simple sight of Shira , Lence will be imcapable to attack . Zeke will ask furiously about this disagreement , and lence will keep answering him that he can’t . By a nervous attitude , Zeke will scratch him badly , and Diego will pursue his foe for revenge . As Zeke will stumble on a tree root , he’ll beg Diego for mercy . But after all he have caused , Diego will ask him to disappear as fast as possible , before he has the chance to kill him . After that , Diego will join Shira along Lence’s dead body . He will not contend himself and will tip out tears . A long emotional moment will begin .
After that , Shira will explain to Diego that she remembered all of her past , by the sudden recognition of Lence on her : at the time that she was born , she receive a negative view from the pack , and was quickly asked to die (They’re pack thought that it was some sort of curse for having a white saber in their midst) , Therefor , Lence was a friend of hers and was trying to protect her with all his might . At that moment , she ran-away , leaving her family without saying goodbye . She really regretted it , but the trouble washed away as she joined Gutt’s crew . Without anybody knowing , Buck , secretly joined by Peaches , Louis and the possums , will learn all about her , and quickly he’ll remember his past , when he was left alone in the underworld , and started to live there , until now .
Buck and the others will join the half-pack , and at the moment that Shira sees the weasel , they will show their relationship by a hug , from which Buck will tell her that she made the best choice , Shira smiles .
At the end , Sid will come up by a conclusion while being narrator , and as he concludes , we will see a cameo of Roshan , now adult , with his clan in another world , where he rethinks of the necklace that he left to Manny .

Voici la version remanié

Mais tu ne seras peut etre pas le premier poste la vite elle va beaucoup leur plaire mais ils ont surement déjà eu une idée de scénario et ça pourrait les aider.

Beaucoup les aidé en effet :p
Je leur expliquerait que c'est çà ce que les fans veulent , et je leur expliquerais énormement l'interet de cet épisode , qui pourrait vraiment plaire au Fan , pas vrai ?

At the beginning , Sid will be the narrator to introduce us to the story with of course a little presentation on the herd’s situation . First , the herd will be unchanged , and we will focus primarily on the saber couple . We will see many dialogues between them and many hunting part scenes (Well , you decide anyway) . Then the trigger part will be the sudden absence of Peaches and Louis , and the arrival of a wounded incomer ( as told in the synopsis) who will be none other than Diego’s childhood friend named Lence . Diego will recognize him quickly , but not Lence (They had very small contacts because they were living in separated packs ,but had strong bonds between each-other) The truth behind this character is that he is associated to 2 other sabers (One will be Zeke , the ancient member of Sotto’s clan , and Jayle , a female saber whose origins are unknown .) including the leader Aaron , who later will be known as Sotto’s soul mate (Seeking revenge after his death) and was also known as being once the leader of Shira’s clan , from which she escaped. By the simple sight on this odd-figure , Shira will start to have visions and nightmares from her horrible past , and she’ll start to sense danger at the appearance of this outsider.

And she was right : further down the movie, we will learn that the wounded saber is actually a spy at the service of Aaron , for whom he’ll bring information so that he can prepare an ambush on the herd . As Sid (also searching occasionally for her grand-mother , lost somewhere in the island) continues to search for Peaches , Crash and Eddie will meet the path of Buck , the lost weasel , stranded on a Beach , clearly searching for his knife . After that the possums fill him with the latest news on what happened during these past three years ; they will set up camp and start arguing on Buck’s story

Buck tells his tale of having his world falling part by part and uplifting to the surface by the terrible earth quake caused by Scrat and of being lost in the middle of the ocean , drifting , he’ll point out that he was found by a pirate ship. The great ape Gutt , proposed him to join the crew , and he obviously accepted . After a quick pose , he’ll explain that he started to have a relationship with Shira , by discussing each other day and night . But one evening , he asked a question about her origins, and it got him into trouble : at this point , the saber will avoid him, and later on Gupta will accuse Buck of being a troublemaker, and they will get into a great fight , which will end by the defeat of Buck , and his exclusion from the crew by a Knock-out .

He will be retained (Without buck knowing) in the low decks (which was intended for prisoners) where he will be left to melt with the ship till now. And at the moment that the herd took possession of the ship to move on to another place to live , Buck went drifting , unconscious , to finally drift ashore .
The story finished, he’ll volunteer to help the possums to find Peaches . Change of scene : Aaron’s group will attack without warning (including Lence) . Battle scenes will be everywhere.

Back to Buck , the little group will find Peaches with other teenagers, joined later by Sid , on a sea cliff , looking at the big whale Precious who was seemingly having a problem with its mouth . Crash and Eddie will ask Peaches “why all the fuss” , and she will reply that Louis is trapped inside the whale’s body because he was asked by to try and find the object that was hurting Precious . By the will of regaining extreme adventures , Buck will enter the big body of the monster , to retrieve Louis . Storm will rise up and Buck will have problem inside . After a long wait , Precious will belch out Buck on the beach , and Louis will be expulsed by the blowhole , shortly rescued by two disgusted possums . The weasel , while adventuring inside the whale’s body and while being expulsed , has held on to a sharp object , who was stuck in between the ribs of the whale. As he washes it , he’ll be extremely happy to be finally reunited with his deer old knife and will dance for hours ! But as he calms down , he rethinks of Rudy , and also the fact that he’ll never see him again , he’ll curse himself for his mistake of leaving his dear old friend without saying goodbye . As he joins the others , he’ll meet Granny , who was slumbering peacefully in Precious’s body , until she was woken by Buck’s yelling . She got out as the whale parked itself on the cliff , and she will be in a dangerous mood , and the weasel will already be listed as a troublemaker , according to Granny . Louis will start to build a relation with Buck , by the fact that he used the weasel’s knife (making him some kind of special guy to Buck) and the possums will be extremely jealous .

The storm was still roaring and the battle didn’t end well : Jayle has been knocked out severely ; Aaron will be sent down a cliff and will suffer a quick end .Lence will be badly hurt by Zeke for a thing he could never forgive : seeing Shira , the saber will be incapable of attacking . Zeke will ask furiously about this disagreement, and Lence will keep answering him that he can’t. By a tempted movement, his companion will wound Lence badly , and Diego will pursue his foe for vengeance . As Zeke will stumble on a tree root , he’ll beg Diego for mercy , and for an old friend. But after all the trouble he did, Diego will ask him to disappear as fast as possible , before he has the chance to kill him . After that , Diego will join Shira along Lence’s dead body . He will not contend himself and will tip out tears . A long emotional moment will begin .

After that , Shira will silently tell to Diego that she remembered all of her past , by the sudden recognition of Lence on her : at the time that she was born , she receive a negative view from the pack , and was quickly asked to prove herself in different tasks (They’re pack thought that it was some sort of curse for having a white saber in their midst) . She was really nervous and couldn’t concentrate , so she failed in every purview . The chef will quickly command to the others to kill her . Therefore, Lence was opposed and protected her with all his might . At that moment , she ran-away , leaving her family without saying goodbye . She really regretted it , but the trouble washed away as she met Gutt’s crew ,and she sworn to forget her past for the better . She showed the earing and told that it was a gift of Gutt , for being a member . Without anybody knowing , Buck , secretly joined by Peaches , Sid , Granny , Louis and the possums , will learn all about her , and quickly he’ll remember his past , when he was left alone in the underworld , and started to live there , until now . Diego , Shira and the weasel , deep in their minds , will notice that they have similar stories between each other (This will show later a strong bond between them) .Buck and the others will join the half-pack , and at the moment that Shira sees the weasel , they will show their relationship by a hug , from which Buck will tell her that she made the best choice , and Shira will show her reply by a smile

Buck will finally be re-welcomed by the herd and they will continue their settling in the new world.
At the end , Sid will come up by a conclusion while being narrator , and as he concludes , we will see a cameo of Roshan , now adult , with his clan in another world , where he rethinks of the necklace that he left to Manny . And it’s still there , waiting for its owner to find it

J'ai encore Editer a fond le résumé pour vous expliquer exactement mon idée

Aller .... BOUGE TOI MARTYX CAR C'EST UNE CHANCE POUR TOI DE TE FAIRE ENTENDRE !
Officiellement , peut-etre demain je leur enverrait .
Qu'il puissent décaler la date de sortie en vue de mon scénario , çà marche pour moi , et je serais là pour attendre le résultat :D